Seeing the verses on the screen, I'm not sure about the last line now. It may have to change. What do you think?
Wednesday, 16 February 2011
New Poem
I've created a new poem, Nature's Kaleidoscope.
It has been snapped up by Marc for his Folding Mirror blog, so you need to head over there if you'd like to check it out. He's found a rather better image for it than mine as well.
Seeing the verses on the screen, I'm not sure about the last line now. It may have to change. What do you think?
Seeing the verses on the screen, I'm not sure about the last line now. It may have to change. What do you think?
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2 comments:
Thanks again for a lovely poem Jean. The last line seems fine to me. Have a nice day and weekend.
Thank you Marc. I always enjoy reading your folding mirrors.
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